Ow! My tooth hurts!

One a sunny Monday morning, my mum and I went to the Dentist in Pt.England for my tooth extraction.

Before we went, I had some breakfast. I had some scrumptious spaghetti. After that I got changed and my mum and I went to the Panmure shops to catch the bus.

Soon, we hopped off at the closest bus stop and we went to the Pt.England Dentist, which is just next to Pt.England School. we waited nearly a whole hour before the dentist called us in. I was a bit scared.

First, the dentist numbed my tooth with anesthetic so my tooth wouldn’t hurt when it gets removed. It took a while before my mouth was numb. Then it was extraction time, the dentist got out a tool and wriggled the tooth out. It hurt just a bit.

After the dentist appointment, the dentist gave us the tooth in a tissue because the tooth was bleeding. We went home in the bus. Whenever I eat now, the place where the tooth used to be feels a bit weird because I use that tooth mostly for biting my food and now it's not there.

We are learning to understand and use language features in my recount.
I know this when I use appropriate time words to sequence the events in my recount. 

I love eating spam!!!

On an early Sunday morning, I went to my basketball training. I went with my family and teammates.

We did a quick warm up, then we did some drills like egg beater and four corners. Egg beater is a shooting drill with two balls. Four corners is a passing drill with one to four balls and the more balls, the harder it gets. Soon we did a five on five game. We did not count the scores but we had fun.

Later some of my teammates and I  went to my teammates house which was at West Auckland. We went to my teammate’s room and played his PS4. The first game we played was minecraft. We played the tutorial , went on creative mode and found all the secrets. We found all the 12 music discs, found stampy’s house and found Mojang’s Castle. I already found all the secrets but one music disc. Then we made a rapid fire arrow shooter. We filled it with flame charges, but the flame charges burned the sand temple.

Eventually we had lunch. We ate one of my favourite foods which is spam and rice. It was really tasty and delicious! Also, I drank a cup of water afterwards.

Not before long, we went back to the room and played PS4 . We watched Five Nights at Freddy 4 gameplay and theories on youtube. The my friend played NBA2k15. The match was Golden State Warriors vs Spurs.

Meanwhile my other friend and I played Minecraft Pocket Edition on our phone and tablet. We cut some trees down and made a house. Suddenly, I got lost! I couldn’t find the house until I saw my friend’s name tag so I ran towards it and helped build the house.

Time flew by and we had to go. It was fun going to my friend’s house. I wish we had more time so we could finish building the house together.

We are learning to use language features in my recount.

I know I can do this when I use different sentence starters to make my writing more interesting.

Do you know what language features are?

WALT identify and use language features.
I know I can do this when I list all the verbs, adverbs and adjectives from the story.